The Union…

Seasons have flown away,

And he waits with wishful eyes,

Gazing at the ashen skies,

Each moment of each day.

*

She lingers in a misty cage,

Between the heaven and earth,

Trying to free her stifled mirth,

Which roars in steaming rage.

*

Voila! She finds the door ajar,

And out she comes with glee,

Now she can almost see,

Her love, which once seemed so far.

*

The rain drop gently hits the soil,

And caresses his parched face,

Glued by a tight embrace,

Passion begins to boil.

*

Light cracks in heaven above,

The sky in wonder shouts,

The first blade of green grass sprouts,

And consummates their love.

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23 responses to “The Union…”

  1. Destination Infinity says :

    The penultimate paragraph was too good. Nice poem.

    Destination Infinity

  2. Mattie J. says :

    I love the metaphor. Truly beautiful, thanks so much for sharing ^_^

  3. Bikram says :

    oooooooooohhhh Romance wah ji wah …

    beautiful light poem loved it , wish everyone get a life tlike that ..

    lovely words even a dumbo like me understood them .. thank you ..

    • Chhavi says :

      🙂 Haanji Romance…. the weather is so romantic these days….. 😉

      Thanks for liking the poem, Bikram.
      C’mon… You are not a dumbo. Don’t say that 🙂

  4. Chatterbox says :

    Beautiful poetic notes brimming with love 😀
    Loved it!!

  5. Punam J R says :

    And consummates their love……
    wow! Chhavi, that is really touching. Beautifully written.

  6. ajay says :

    It brimeth with love. 😀 A nice and fitting ode to rain. Beautiful! Please read my take on rain too here. 😀

  7. madeleine sara says :

    Brilliant last line. :O)

  8. Pepper says :

    Very beautiful 🙂

  9. Deboshree says :

    Really beautiful poem Chhavi. 😀
    I could visualize the anticipation of rain – the clouds, the winds and the dark… and of course, the eventual consummation as you call it. Very well versed! 😀

  10. Novroz says :

    Lovely poem.

    I don’t know if you know about this site or not, it is called Creative Writing Ink. They give us pictures and then we create short story or poem. I Think you should join too.

    I can’t copy-paste the link here because I am using my mobile, I can only copy the link to my introductory page of the site http://t.co/yaTIgS1

    Do join us…the merrier the better 🙂

  11. Pixie says :

    Sighhh!!! how very lovely!! 🙂 🙂

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